Wednesday, May 7, 2014

Beautifully written ( Dori ) and daring and fun and like throwing it




                                                             Beautifully written and daring and fun and like throwing it


                                                              all out there for the elements to do with what 


                                                              they will, rain or snow or wind or calm 


                                                             we still are here and we still have to realize bits 



                                                             of what you write , and for me that we are


                                                             very small parts of this fabric and tapestry



                                                             of life that binds and holds us loosely together chal


                                                              lenging our minds and our wits and caring not


                                                              as we live our lives sharing ( maybe ),



                                                              caring ( maybe not ) , yearning ( yes ), wanting ( for 

                                                               sure ) , and always searching for some mean


                                                                ing, some relevance ( ours ) and in 


                                                                life. I like what you write, I like you


                                                                r attitude, I am drawn to you



                                                                r attitude, I am drawn to your spirit - you'r 



                                                               e alive , and for me, test



                                                                ing the waters : bravo!







Written in response to a poem I just read and enjoyed. I liked what I wrote and have copied it below and turned it into the poem that I wrote in a form that I think brings it all together better. Cheers, Enjoy, Wednesday morning, May 7th, 2014 ...


Anthony Quinn Beautifully written and daring and fun and like throwing it all out there for the elements to do with what they will, rain or snow or wind or calm we still are here and we still have to realize bits of what you write , and for me that we are very small parts of this fabric and tapestry of life that binds and holds us loosely together challenging our minds and our wits and caring not as we live our lives sharing ( maybe ), caring ( maybe not ) , yearning ( yes ), wanting ( for sure ) , and always searching for some meaning, some relevance ( ours ) and in life. I like what you write, I like your attitude, I am drawn to youattitude, I am drawn to your spirit  - you're alive , and for me, testing the waters : bravo!

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